Me:COME ONE COME ALL TO RUSSELL STREET SCHOOL!!!
E:FOR THE FIRST EVER HOLOBOX!!
Me:BY THE PRESS OF A BUTTON, U WILL BE SURROUNDED BY A TUBE LIKE HOLOGRAM! ITS THE TECH OF THE FUTURE! USE IT AS A PHONE OR IPAD!
E:YOU CAN SPY ON PEOPLE PLAY REAL LIFE MINCRAFT AND SO MUCH MORE!
Me:WITH AN ORANGE LID AND GREEN BOTTOM ITS THE BEST COLOUR COMBINATION OUT THERE! BUY NOW OR ALL WILL SELL OUT, FOR ONLY $300 DOLLARS! ONLY 300!
E:SEE YOU AT RSS!
Feedback: Great script! I can tell your tone was really excited like!
Feedforward:Maybe next time you could be more dramatic about it!
Evaluation: I think Emma and I did well on making our ad persuasive but next I think we could add some humour to make it more interesting.