1 short sentence 2-4 words
Dice 1 3. Onomatopoeia
1 what you see. 4. Long compound sentence
2 what you do. 5.similie
3 what you say. 6. Medium sentence
4 what you think.
5 what you hear.
This is my story
Feedback: Thats very good work. I liked how you worked with a buddy and made it realistic.
Feedforward: (Just saying... You were suppose to do a cross country recount.) maybe next time you could work by your self or make a poster or something so it's a bit different when you present it.