Thursday, 31 March 2016

Writing portfolio post

Description: this term for writing we worked on stories about camp. They could be informational, entertaining etc. I wrote a piece that would entertain people. I'm still working on the rest of the chapters but this should be good for now. I'm working with Naomi. You should go and see her blog post. Anyway this is my story and unfinished draft.

Adventures With Stampy
Behind Cabin Doors for boys

Chapter 1 my name is

YAY! Kayaking is next, my favourite activity I'm the pro at this, too bad the Uni bully is in my activity group, sigh. I just can't wait to see the tiny squids dancing around in the water. Luckily I brought my gopro with me so I can email Spence and Noah the video since they can't come on camp with us. Oh by the way I'm Joseph Garrett. I'm in university, You also may know me as the great stampylonghead, one of the most famous youtubers. I'm not the most famous, Pewdiepie is and my gosh he is annoying, he is the bully of this university. Hopefully he'll learn at least some manners on this camp. His girlfriend Marzia is one of the kindest people in uni! But Jess is kinder ahhhhh Jess, I have a huge crush on her, like HUGE! She is also a youtuber. She is often referred as aphmau but pewds calls her aphmoo, implying that she's FAT! Rude right? And I think she likes me to! I can't bear to even think about it. Oops everyone's leaving!

Chapter 2 Inked

Life jacket check, go pro check, water proof cam check. OK! I have everything I need for kayaking yay! Insructor Beth ”hello and welcome to kayaking. Is there anyone who has done this before and would like to help me teach?” Ooh me me “okay stampy.” YAY! “ great go and get an instructors paddle please. ”Ok. Pewdiepie ”nerd hahahaha” “what's your name?” “Pewdiepie but you can just call me pewds hottie.” “oh hahahah you are horrible at flirting and shut up, I come from your uni I still go there but for this trip ONLY, I am an INSTUCTOR got it. My name is Beth a.k.a squaishey I'm friends with Joseph and a youtuber.” Woofles “YOU JUST GOT OWNED BY A GIRL,I'M TELLIN MARZIA AND I FILMED IT ALL!” “ nuuuuu marzia will kill me I will Neva bully again i so sorry Beth” 1 hour later…... okay I have got my cam set up 30 mins to teach and 30 mins to set up my underwater live cam. Time to hop into the water on my kayak ahh this is great actually Beth got me thinking what happens in a girls cabin? Maybe...SPLASH  AHH I can't see the squids inked my eyes ohh here comes Jess and Beth together “ come on Jess lets go help him” said Beth “ yeah he's covered in ink” “ hey are you alright?” Says Jess and Beth together u.u.ummm yeah s.s.s.o.omeone p.u.ushed me “ ugh I hate Pewdiepie he calls me fat he is the worst” says jess. Jess could you help me get the ink out of my eyes and turn under water cam off, squaishey can you do that for me please “sure” * looking around for somthing* h.HEY! where has my g.GoPro gone oh no. “ It's okay Joseph I can get you a new one” thanks Jess um is it alright if I call you Aphmau? “ yeah sure but do not call me Aphmoo” no I won't hahaha “ HEY STAMPS! I got your waterproof live stream cam but it's covered in ink, I did turn it off though somehow” I should put my glasses on and wash the camera off ms instructor can I go rest? “ yes you may hehehe” “um by Joseph” said Aphmau.

Feedback: That's a very cool and funny story! It made me giggle! I dont think other people will know all this if they haven't seen squaishey and stampy's and aphmow and other people's videos. It's good you explained it. AbbyY
Feed forward: maybe you could have a page before you start the story about who the mincrafters are for people that don't know. AbbyY

Evaluation: I think this is one of my best story's yet. It will include all the you tubers I love. I think next time I could make the chapters way more interesting 

Wednesday, 23 March 2016

I Statements

description: this week we have been learning about I statements. An I statement is when you say when ever someone has ticked you off or made you feel sad and you deal with it like this... "you can't play ugh" says your friend "I feel sad that I can't play because I have no one else to play with so I thought that I could play with you." "Oh i'm sorry I didn't mean to hurt you okay you can play"  the more hurtful way to do it is ( I don't recommend doing this) "you cant play" WHY CANT I PLAY? YOU'RE MEAN!!!!!!" Here is another demonstration on video. The people who did this with me was Atlanta, Emma M and Charlotte P

Friday, 18 March 2016

My Whakapapa/family tree

Description: for e te Reo this year we made our family tree if rolled my blog last year the you would know what it is if you don't then you can't check out my last years blog post a family tree is when you write all of your relatives down and connect them to each other and you.

Here is my family tree 

Feedback: it's really cool how you did your family in a tree .Emma

Feedforward: Next time you could try to make the colours really pop .Emma

Wednesday, 16 March 2016

2016 camp diary portfolio post

Description: so as you may know we went on camp last week but we also decided to keep note or write down in our camp diary so if you prefer what we did that day and ups and downs we had ten activities and we did them all including a few extra some of the activities included: rafts kyaks archery air rifles etc etc. the camp we went to was named el rancho catchy name. El rancho is heaps of and enjoyment but it is in wakanae New Zealand must suck for the people who do not live in New Zealand and want to have a fun camp. If you want to look ant what our camp diary looks when not written in look below. Below there is also photos of my camp diary.

Feedback: I like how in you showed one of your personality in what you enjoyed the most and I like how you didn't tell.
Feed forward: I think that next time you should take a more focused pictures.

Friday, 4 March 2016

One word sample

Description: We made some art that shows our one word in a sign. We decided to do a pose that looked like we were holding a sign the we drew out some designs for what we wanted our one word sign to look out of my two designs I chose the moustache design as you will see I am holding my sign  above my head.

Feedback:good job with choosing the word.
Feedfoward:maybe next time make it clearer. Naomi

Thanks nay nay for the feedback and feed forward I will certainly make it clearer next time.

Evaluation: I think that my piece of art work looks really cool and kind of helped me with my word truth it helped me start to think that I can do anything in the timeline I am given. Next time I think I could work on making the moustaches look more realistic and make the sign more readable.

Goals for camp

Description: For camp we needed to create some goals that help us with our one word for the year like mine is truth.

Here is a photo of my goals