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Feedback:I read your poems and felt so many strong emotions Devin. You are an amazing writer
Feed forward: keep writing as you have a real talent. We talked about your title and I am glad you changed "nice" to lovely. Make sure the words you use really describe how you feel. Charlotte
Evaluation: I think that I did well on my poems because of how emotional it makes me feel but next time I could make the free verse poem easier to read.