Friday, 27 November 2015


Description: in Troys writing group we are learning cinquains they are when you have a certain amount of syllables per 5 lines line one is 2 syllables line two is 4 syllables line 3 is 6 syllables line 4 is 8 syllables and line 5 is 2 syllables. Here is one of my cinquains for this cinquain we had to make it about our passion my passion is YouTube 


                                                 My whole life

                                   Laughing, Minecrafting, Gaming
                                     Wishing to meet them forever

 I think that you did a good job.
I think that You need to work on your language.harriet

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